Monday 5 January 2015

Essay Learner Response

Mark: 24/48 Grade: D+

- Lacks concrete examples - write an extra paragraph on Citizen Journalism with evidence to back it up.
- Not enough on a Marxist perspective - add a paragraph which argues that audiences still don't have power because the media conglomerates are too big and make too much money, again with examples.

conglomerates - group of business of built of business - news corp made of small businesses and 

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